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Sloths over Ethiopia #0074 $ September 9, 1999
Sloths over Ethiopia is a part of Westphalia Enterprises
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The following is apparently an actual paper turned in by an actual college
student at an actual university. We won't tell you who (we don't know) or
where (it's in Illinois somewhere). We just want you to excel in life,
which means not doing this:
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When I was revising my paper, there was three major
mistakes that I had to fix. The first change I made
was in my thesis of the paper. The second change was
making my second paragraph into two separate
paragraphs. The rest of the changes were just regular
errors. Like in wording or placement of information.
All these correction that I had to make allowed me to
make my paper better and get my point across.
In my introduction I removed, some of the sentences
that I thought did not make since. I also mixed at
least two of my sentences so it would not sound life a
fragment. During my editing I also switch the places
with some of my sentences because say "Everybody says
that writing is supposed to help get your emotions
down on paper" before saying "Whenever I have had to
write a paper it takes me forever to get an idea about
what I want to say" didn't make since. So I switched
the place of both of these sentences and put the
second sentences before the first so it would make
better since.
My second paragraph there was not many mistakes t6hat
I had to fix. The only major change that I made was
to make the second paragraph into two separate
paragraphs. I realized that I was changing the
subject so I just cut it in half.
The third paragraph mostly had the mistake of the way
I worded my sentences and using certain words too many
times. When I was writing I wrote down the same thing
that I was saying into two different sentences. I
felt that I was using to many of the same words in
this paragraph. I was using words like "like",
"ideas", and "that". Therefore, I cut some of these
words out and combines sentences to make it sound
better.
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Sloths over Ethiopia #0074 $ September 9, 1999
Sloths over Ethiopia is a part of Westphalia Enterprises
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